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The Data that supports my Essay : First Task

• Jakarta - Chair person of the Presidium of the Indonesian Anti-Defamation Society , Septiaji Eko Nugroho, said the hoax around health issues was the third most after the political and religious issues hoax. Therefore, hoax information must be resisted because it is not only dangerous for individuals but also society at large.
• BANDUNG, (PR) .- Hoax is not only misleading, but also has the potential to hurt economically. In fact, economic losses arising from hoaxes can be very large, not including non-material losses. This was stated by Chief Digital Startup, Ecommerce & Fintech (DEF) Sharing Vision who is also the Chief Executive Officer (Co-CEO) of the Bandung Initiative Movement (BIM), Nur Islami Javad (Jeff), in Bandung, Tuesday, August 20, 2019. Hoax, according to him, can make clients and prospective clients stay away. "Hoax can also make consumers run away and in turn will reduce sales figures and business turnover," he said.
• Liputan6.com, Jakarta - Hoax cases on social media (social media) led to death occurred in Gujarat, India. Four beggars became the butt of the masses, even the only one who had to die.
• KOMPAS.com - In a study, psychologists agreed that hoax news could have a negative impact on mental health, such as post-traumatic stress syndrome (PTSD), cause anxiety, to violence.

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Psychological damage hoaks?

            What do you think after hearing the word hoax? A hoax is an opinion, a hoax which is deliberately exaggerated so it looks as if the information is true. At present, Hoax has been rampant and increasingly widespread even the hoax is also not uncommon to endanger many people and cause misunderstanding. Hoax has 3 things that are very dangerous, including the disadvantaged community, the emergence of disputes between groups and which is very dangerous to cause psychological trauma within.

             The first case of the spread of hoaxes is also detrimental to many circles. For example, If there is hoax news about the danger of one particular food brand spreading. This will definitely hurt the brand's food producers because the public already believes the hoax and will not buy the food mentioned in the fake news. Of course this will make income for the food brand company dropped dramatically.

          The second is the spread of hoaxes which result in disputes between certain groups. For example, if hoax news about an organization's ugliness spreads that it was deliberately made to raise the name of another organization to be good. This will certainly lead to disputes between some groups, anxiety and others.

             In addition to that, the effect that is no less dangerous than before is that hoaxes can cause psychological trauma to humans. This is evidenced by the existence of excessive fear and anxiety from news that is not yet known the truth. For example, a hoax about a dangerous disease that is easily transmitted and able to kill in the near future has entered Indonesia.

             In conclusion, be careful about receiving news. because it could be that you are enjoying lying news that turns out to be dangerous to yourself psychological. For that reason, before we read further, it is better to find out where the source is and to better understand whether the news makes sense. This will be the right way to ward off hoax news.


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  Psychological damage hoaks?

          Nowadays, Hoax is already rampant in various media and hoax is also detrimental to many people. Hoax also has dangerous effects such as disputes and trauma.

         Hoax has become a major concern because it has caused various problems, such as making consumers a culinary business declined dramatically. This was stated based on Chief Digital Startup, Ecommerce & Fintech (DEF) Sharing Vision who is also the Chief Executive Officer (Co-CEO) of the Bandung Initiative Movement (BIM), Nur Islami Javad (Jeff), in Bandung, Tuesday, August 20, 2019. Hoax, according to him, can make clients and prospective clients stay away. "Hoaxes can also make consumers run away and in turn will reduce sales figures and business turnovers," he said.

           If we get the news, we have to make sure the source is clearer so that misunderstandings can not occur that can take victims, such as Liputan6.com, Jakarta - Hoax cases on social media (social media) led to death occurred in Gujarat, India. Four beggars became the butt of the masses, even the only one who had to die.

         After that, hoaxes can also be mentally damaging. This case has occurred several times. Based on KOMPAS.com - In a study, psychologists agreed that hoax news could have a negative impact on mental health, such as post-traumatic stress syndrome (PTSD), cause anxiety, to violence.

          So, we can avoid Hoax by looking for clear sources and have more reasonable news so as not to endanger yourself. Always be careful when receiving information.